some pretty sweet stuff in here. i especially like the intro and the more avant garde bits :)
some pretty sweet stuff in here. i especially like the intro and the more avant garde bits :)
neat :) it could be louder though, had to turn up my volume to hear it at a good volume
I really dig the intro, great sounding delay and nice spacey reverb there. it felt really interesting and juttery when the drums kicked in and I love that. if I had to give any critique, I think the bit from 1:22 to 1:50 went on a little long for what it was. sweet ending too :)
i dig it :) if i had to give some critique, i think it could use some more dynamic range in the mix, it all feels compressed and could use some breathing room, but i understand that's the intended style of the track. great melodies and lots of interesting parts throughout
Thank you for the advice! I'm still pretty new to mixing, but I'll definitely look into how to make the sound more dynamic.
decent ideas here but it gets really repetitive. The mix is pretty muddy as well
yeah i know its repetitive i just put the drums on it so it could be somewhat finished but it still isn't done i just posted it to post it
i dig it, could have been louder though, everything is mixed really quiet. the drum programming wasn't my thing, the samples were pretty generic and could have used more velocity variation. i liked the ending the most :)
pretty repetitive - when you're using a common chord progression you could try to introduce more variation in the instrumentation :)
woobly.
could have used more diversity, it got repetitive by the end. pleasant though :)
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